I am working on my home website and would like opinions on any changes needed?

i need blunt, unbiased input. i am starting to work on it so there isn't alot of info on the site i will be adding links to my affiliate sites (walmart, budk, happy bunny, etc). i also have two other sites, these are the stores.


www.iceislimited.org


www.shopsbyiceisonline.com


www.webshopsbyiceis.com


i will be using the profits to fund the more philanthropic side of my business-helping homeless families get back on their feet



Hi. First off let me commend you on what you are doing! May God bless you in every way towards the success of your heartfelt project.





Your first listed, www.iceislimited.org, site still needs some work as you know. You may want to add a Contact tab, possibly move your mission statement to the Home page. The Section "OUR MISSION" may also need separated, parts about ICEIS going on Home page and other parts about yourself onto the About Us section. This will not only help organize it better, but will separate it for easier reading. I found that most people will not even spend the time scrolling down a page so they may miss important content that you may have towards bottom of the page. Always check for typing errors, but I know you are not quite done with it yet. The fonts, for the tabs, should all be in CAPS or all in Upper and Lower case. In your FAQ section, you can place your own questions/answers in there to start with, something you perceive someone asking. Example: someone might ask you if they can sell things on your site or link to your shops, so you can put that question and answer in there just in case a visitor is already thinking about it. Your legal info tab, not sure it is my pc or what, but it comes out with one document over the top of another. You maybe want to just put 2 links in there that take the visitor to both documents for full readability.





www.shopsbyiceisonline.com looks ok





www.webshopsbyiceis.com looks ok visually, but I checked your source code and your are missing meta tags and keywords. The search engines will never find your site without them.





Hope this helped! Good luck!